Not a good way to open a cover letter. I’d love to see if you can tell me why (hint: it’s not because the company is “(XYZ)” – I did that to obscure the name of the employer:

“I am presenting my résumé to be considered for the varied positions that I may qualify for within your organization. I am currently providing Analyst Support to (XYZ) Financial in the effort to further hone, as well as acquire more innovative on-job skills.”

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